Chapter 1, Page 17: Good For You

posted June 17th, 2016, 7:42 am


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June 17th, 2016, 7:46 am

Royle McCulloch

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I got a lot of sprites to work on for the next update.

So thanks for reading, and don't forget to comment, rate and fav!

~Royle

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June 17th, 2016, 10:44 am

Ultimate the Hedgehog

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"Yeah, good for you."
I laughed.

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June 17th, 2016, 10:50 am

Nice-ness

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So it IS a guy. Geeze, this has been a rollercoaster.

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June 17th, 2016, 11:35 am

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The last panel is humorous. Although, I have a bit of an issue with 6th panel. What's going on there? I know Lilen is moving behind Shard, but how is he doing that?

Did Shard do a 360 degree turn to expose her back? Or did Lilen walk behind her on the bridge? If so, Shard should've been in front instead.

Anyway, keep up the good work.

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June 18th, 2016, 3:15 am

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@Snurple-the-Hedgehog: Well I guess Shard turned about 40 degrees. Kinda hard to show that when the bridge is 2D. Meant for it to be just her walking past her.

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June 17th, 2016, 12:53 pm

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The guys look like girls, the girls look like guys... I DON'T KNOW WHAT'S GOING ON ANYMOOORRRREEEEE -shot-

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June 17th, 2016, 1:48 pm

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@Shard: Welcome to anime.

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